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Ok,.... here are my poems. I will put poems by other people in here too.


The Ring
Love is the master of the ring,
And life is a circus tent.
What is this silly song you sing?
Love is the master of the ring.

I am afraid!
Afraid of love,
And loves bitter whip!
Afraid,
Afraid of love,
And loves sharp, stinging whip!

What is this silly song you sing?
Love is the master of the ring.
        By: Langston Hughs

Religion

I walk upon the stone hedge
to play upon my broken head
for fear will kill my stolen sole
to brace me with a midnights tole
you think Im just a poser
looking for a way
to say Im just a loser
for that is all I say
to you a broken stone
would mean nothing
but you do not understand
look past what i am inside
thats all you will ever know
all you know is how I came upon you
Im just a broken stone
     [Titanium Tiger]


~Here are some of my poems~

 I Think of You

As I lay down in my sorrows
I think of you
All the good times; I'm letting go
All the bad times; I'm letting go
The thought of you brings me to tears
It brings me forth to face my fears.

Thinking back about my past
I think of you
How we met and became one
How we talked and became one
Your presence takes away my purpose
There’s nothing left for us.

Walking down a lonely path of secrets
I think of you
Dreaming and loving you; a nightmare
Fearing and hating you; a nightmare
All I ever do
Is think of you.

 A New Life

Cold still nights
Dark lonely chambers
I stand alone
With only a name
I slip away.

Horoscopes intertwine
We become one
Life becomes a sin
And I die within.

  The love life of a tacit girl

Just as things were goin my way
All hell broke loose
And we fell apart
You tore out my heart
But I stood tall.

Months went by and I tried to forget
No matter how hard I fought
You were always on my mind
There was no getting over you
The feeling was forever.

It seems impossible to be together now
But I’m game, I’ll give it another shot
You’re my everything and so much more
You think you understand
But you have no idea.

I thought I knew how you felt
But I guess I was wrong
I was so blind
I was such a fool
Even though I know this, I’ll always feel the same.

  Dancing with the Dead

Dark cold nights,
Bright shiny stars,
The trees breath weaves through their limbs,
Only fear is found in the air,
No happiness, no future,
Hope is gone; nonexistent.

The laughter comes up from the children’s graves,
Deep, painful moans creep from the elders,
Colorful leaves dance with the spirits of hope and faith,
Following each others graceful steps, we unite as one,
But soon the night falls into the sunrise,
And we must part.

We bow farewell,
Leaving as the cold night disappears,
The stars start to fade as the warm sun rises,
I will be back tonight,
This I promise,
So, save the last dance for me.

 In the Eyes of a Lonely Girl

In the eyes of a lonely girl,
Theres so much pain inside,
No one understands, the way she feels,
Her lonely life is a turning wheel,
Fading in her open lies,
You can see it in her eyes!

  
         If I Could

So many ways,
To correct myself,
But all's a blur,
Then, I say,
If I could,
I'd tell you how I feel,
If I could,
I'd die for you,
If I could,
I would,
Stars in the sky,
Brightly shining,
Moon, larger than eyes of an angel,
Why cant I do this,
But now's my chance,
Here,
If I could,
I'd tell you,
If I could,
I would
        
           Is It You?

I awake to the sun, or is it just your face,
The birds chirp a tune, but sounds like your voice,
The clouds move motionlessly like your walk,
I tend to wonder, is it you?,
Then I see you in class,
Your face looks like the sun,
When you speak,
I hear birds chirping to the morning songs,
You walk so slowly, you remind me of clouds,
Is it you?,
Are you the morning that awakes me from my deep sleep?,
I wonder if you are connected to each other,
Who are you,
Is it you?

  
 When You

When you laugh,
I get a warm feeling,
When you talk,
People listen,
You seem so kind,
But is this really you?,
Yet inside I know your good,
Seeing you, I freeze,
But not inside,
When you smile, I get chills of
Greatness
When you stare,
You have that something in your eyes,
You make me feel good inside,
When you are around,
When you are you,
I feel like me,
When you touch me,
I freak out,
But I have a cover up,
Your voice reports the news from heaven,
I fall into a spell when your near,
You are the sun shining down on me!,
When you are serious,
I know something is wrong,
When you are with your friends,
I feel empty, but then you
Just appear

Why cant I?

Friendship and trust,
Is what we have,
Your like my best friend,
But I don't know,
There's so much to say to you,
But there's also,
So much I can't,
Why can't I?,
Tell you how I feel,
Why can't I?,
Look into your eyes,
Without feeling shy,
We have so much in common,
But we don't understand each other,
Could there be more,
I don't know,
What does the future hold?,
We'll have to wait,
Why can't I?,
Act the way I want around you,
Why can't I?,
Ask all these questions,
To be answered,
I hope you ask the same questions too.

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2004-11-25 [PaRtY_gUrL0602]: wow! those are great poems!!

2004-12-20 [Silent_Chaos]: thanx

2005-02-07 [de_matteo]: amazing poems

2005-03-21 [Silent_Chaos]: thank you very much

2005-03-22 [de_matteo]: ur very welcome lol

2005-03-23 [Silent_Chaos]: lol

2005-05-29 [Not A Mortal]: AMAZING

2005-06-14 [Go RyAn U RuLe!!!]: these poems are really kwl and i wish i was as gd as u 2 write stuff like that!

2005-06-20 [Silent_Chaos]: thanx everyone...

2005-08-31 [JesusLvr]: one i can really relate to it made me cry (julie i love you!!!!)

2005-09-03 [Silent_Chaos]: i love you too cris. lol

2005-12-31 [Nader 301]: Your poems are excellent Julie. Truly touching.

2005-12-31 [Silent_Chaos]: lol. thanx.

2006-04-28 [Raining Maddens]: Love the poems ^_^

2006-05-29 [sweetkiss]: ditto

2006-05-29 [Silent_Chaos]: thanx

2006-06-02 [sweetkiss]: mm

2006-06-28 [Viva La Mia]: wow! great poems

2006-06-28 [Silent_Chaos]: Thank you...

2006-07-10 [¿gods girl?]: i like your poems my sister has some of her own you think you could copy and paste them on your sight??[Titanium Tiger] is my sister!

2006-07-10 [Silent_Chaos]: sure... and thanks....

2006-08-14 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Love yur poems...^_^

2006-08-14 [Silent_Chaos]: Thanks ^_^

2006-08-17 [sweetkiss]: i have some 2

2006-08-18 [Silent_Chaos]: Ok...

2006-08-18 [sweetkiss]: u really don't need 2 look @ mine. mine suk

2006-08-18 [Silent_Chaos]: Naw, I think theyre great ^_^ Really!

2006-08-20 [sweetkiss]: anx. my friend tried 2 publish them but i said no.. u should do that with yours

2006-08-24 [Silent_Chaos]: I dunno how

2006-08-24 [sweetkiss]: i 4got but mayb if u look it up online?

2006-08-24 [Silent_Chaos]: Ive tried... but its not that easy...

2006-08-25 [sweetkiss]: oo

2006-08-25 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah

2006-08-26 [sweetkiss]: so???

2006-08-26 [Silent_Chaos]: so??? what?

2006-08-27 [sweetkiss]: i donno

2006-08-27 [Silent_Chaos]: lol, ok...

2006-09-06 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: yeah...you should try to publish...I've gotten a couple of mine published...just like in teen Ink and stuff like taht...but it feels realy cool to see you stuff in print!!!

2006-09-07 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah, Im in charge the poetry column for my school paper, which I started, lol, and I put my stuff in there. But yeah, Im seriously not sure how to publish. I dont even know where to begin.

2006-09-18 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Talk to a teacher @ school...they can help...& if you still don't get answeres...just post them on elftown somwhere...some ppl will be able to read them @ least...I've got loads on Here

2006-09-18 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah, I try to post as many poems as possible online. Like here and Myspace... lol

2006-09-19 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Yeah...& then you can get lotza contructive Critisizm

2006-09-19 [Silent_Chaos]: Yep, lol Which is always good ^_^

2006-09-20 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Sometimes^_^

2006-09-20 [Silent_Chaos]: Well, for the most part

2006-09-20 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: HAHA...yeah...some ppl can be real jerks when it comes to that stuff

2006-09-20 [Silent_Chaos]: True, very true. I hate when I come across people like that :p

2006-09-20 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Yeah...I usually blow up on them & tell them to do better(Sarcastically)

2006-09-20 [Silent_Chaos]: lol, Yeah, I usually dont say anything, I mean, its their opinion and if I dont like it, oh well. Ill just ignore it.

2006-09-20 [sweetkiss]: mm

2006-09-20 [Silent_Chaos]: Yep ^_^ lol

2006-09-21 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Yeah...I tend to come to anger quite easily though...one of my many downfalls...

2006-09-21 [Silent_Chaos]: Oh, trust me, I can get angry pretty easy, but I try to keep it to myself... I could seriously hurt someone. lol

2006-09-21 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: HAHA...yeah...I'm a weakling...I prolly wouldn't ever get into a physical fight...just verbal

2006-09-21 [Silent_Chaos]: lol, well, I can be very very violent... um, yeah, its scary sometimes, lol

2006-09-23 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: HaHa....I guess I can too...it just depends on who I'm fighting with

2006-09-23 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah, thats true

2006-09-23 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Yeah....and if I'm on my f'ing pills or not...HAHA

2006-09-24 [Silent_Chaos]: lol, wow... lol Thats great...

2006-09-24 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: HAHA...sure...sometimes

2006-09-24 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah... grr... I need more poems...

2006-09-24 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: write some then...or ask others if you can post theirs

2006-09-24 [Silent_Chaos]: I just wrote one 2 weeks ago, but I have to find it and put it on here. I dunno... Im havin a hard time writing. For some reason.

2006-09-25 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Oh...that's too bad...I've been writing a lot lately....but I seem to do that whan I'm emotional...

2006-09-25 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah, I mean, I have plenty to write about... Believe me I do, but Im just havin a hard time doin it :p

2006-09-25 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: awww...wish I could help...personally...I think it's the best thing in the world to do....writing I mean

2006-09-25 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah, I love writing... I have a journal, but poetry isnt workin out for me right now.

2006-09-25 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Yeah...I journal too....I take My Journal W/ me EVERYWHERE...first of all...I'm not trusting it alone...2nd of all....If I always have it with me...then I have it when I REALLY need to write...

2006-09-25 [Silent_Chaos]: Thats soooo weird. Thats EXACTLY how I am. lol I have it with me 24/7. I just started my second one. Im goin on 3 years Oct. 5. lol YAY! ^_^

2006-09-25 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: HAHA....I just started a new own too...Maybe a week after school started...I have always got my pen to the journal...it bugs my friends sometime...but W/E...

2006-09-25 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah, I call it my stress reliever book. lol I write about everything.

2006-09-25 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Yeah...me too...ooooh...one time my mom read mine...I WAS SOOO PISSED...

2006-09-25 [Silent_Chaos]: Oh, my DAD did that too...

2006-09-25 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: oooh...I was soo mad....& I totally can't trust her NEmore...Ever since that whole incedint(& what led up to it)Me & my mom do NOT get along much...I wrote A lot about that too...Hee

2006-09-26 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah, same here... GRRR for parents. lol

2006-09-26 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Heh...Yesh...can't wait till I'm outta here...on my own...I like being alone...^_^

2006-09-26 [Silent_Chaos]: ME TOOOOOO!!!! Wow, lol thats crazy. But yeah, I seriously want to move to New York and become an author/journalist ^_^

2006-09-26 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Heh....ME TOO...except....IDK about new york....I don't really like cities...I wanna live in a woodsy-type area...Heh...crazy...IDK...I don't care what I become...as long as i'm even a tad happier than I am now...AHHAha

2006-09-27 [Silent_Chaos]: True, very true. I mean, I want to become somethin, kinda famous. I want to help people... I want to help the misunderstood and loners. The people like me.

2006-09-28 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: WOW...heh...that's exactly what I want...I always pictured myself being some Kinda speaker or somethin...to talk to the outcasts to help them get along...and to talk to the socials to show them how much it hurts when they put others down...& I thought if I became an author...then I would be able to talk to more ppl...& I have this really evil vision in my head of stupid girls from my school comeing & asking for my autograph...And me just flately saying no...HeeHee...

2006-09-28 [Silent_Chaos]: DUDE!!!! lol Thats crazy... I think about that all the time. But you know, I really dont care about the fame, I just want to help others.

2006-09-28 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Yeah....I know what you mean...being Famous would be nice...but I'd rather save a kid from suicide...or a school from another columbine...

2006-09-28 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah, exactly! lol ^_^

2006-09-28 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: mmmmmm...I wish kids/teens would just leave eachother alone....and not be so dramatic...

2006-09-28 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah, I totally agree.

2006-10-01 [Setherial]: Nice poems, you really know how to show your feelings! One suggestion: make the titles bold so the poems could be more clear and easier to read (knowing the title is a graet thing) :) keep it up

2006-10-01 [Silent_Chaos]: Oh, eh, thanks... good idea. If Im not busy, and I think about it... Ill bold the titles. And yeah, only in my poetry I can show my feelins.

2006-10-02 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Me too...and with my music....which is still kinda writing though...^^

2006-10-02 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah, thats totally me... lol

2006-10-03 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: It is soooo easy to do...when I have a difficult time trying to talk to ppl...I write what I am trying to say in a letter...or even in poem form...it is so much easier for me...

2006-10-05 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah, me too. lol Actually, Im workin on a poem right now... lol Its eh... weird and not finished... Im far from it. lol

2006-10-10 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Well...I'm sure it will be good...I have to write a poem for English...and everyboday @ school was like "oh that would be perfect for you"...but...honestly...I hate writing poems for school...there are always sooo many restrictions...

2006-10-10 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah, agree. But Im so lost on this poem, I cant finish it. Im on the last line, and Im just goin blank, lol

2006-10-11 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Well...it's the last line...that should be easy enough...I couldn't tell ya though...since I kinda write my poems funny...I just write random stanzas...then rearrange them until I think it souds good...yeah...I know...I'm wierd  T.T

2006-10-11 [Silent_Chaos]: Naw, theres no certain way to writing poems... so its all good. lol But yeah, the last line is the hardest right now.

2006-10-13 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: But your almost done...that's cool...I hadn't written NE in a while...THen on the spur of the moment...I just wrote Like three yesterday...I was a tad emotional...Hee...

2006-10-14 [Silent_Chaos]: lol, good for you, I cant finish it... its been like a week or two now and Im just dead. lol Maybe Ill leave it alone for awhile and get back to it later... lol Maybe?

2006-10-14 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Ooooh...I couldn't do that...sometimes...when I get absolutely stuck...it nags @ the corner's of my mind and I can't get just forget about it....I HAVE to finish it...

2006-10-15 [Silent_Chaos]: lol, Yeah... oh well. I will finish it... ONE DAY! lmao ^_^

2006-10-16 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Yeah..I am COMPLETELY stuck on this new one...It sounds retarded to me...IDK...it's that stupid school project one I was talkin about...I hate when they give you rules to follow...

2006-10-16 [Silent_Chaos]: I know. Thats when I have the most trouble. Their rules and guidelines suck. lol Seriously.

2006-10-20 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Yeah....HaHa....And get this...I finished it and Handed it in on monday...then today my teacher said it was excellent and even gave me extra credit points...but then she went and yelled at me cuz it sounded more like a prose than a poem...AFTER SHE SAID THAT POETRY COULD BE WRITTEN "HOWEVER THE AUTHOR WANTS IT"...Pathetic...Hee

2006-10-20 [Silent_Chaos]: lol, jeeze. but good thing you finished it. ^_^

2006-10-21 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Yeah...I didn't have much choice though...I had to hand it in or get a bad grade...

2006-10-21 [Silent_Chaos]: yeah, true. i rather turn in a bad poem than get a bad grade.

2006-10-26 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Yeah...I am kinda too ambicious though...I would probably work on it for hours to make sure it was handed in AND good...

2006-10-26 [Silent_Chaos]: lol, yeah. I want to write a poem so bad... but nothins coming to mind. Which seriously sucks.

2006-10-26 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: I am really on a roll I have got a couple more in my head right now....But I just went like the whole summer not writing any at all...so...IDK...

2006-10-27 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah, me too. I dont know... I mean, I have a lot goin on, so I have plenty to write about, but nothins comin to mind. Its sooo GAY! LMAO

2006-10-27 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: I got this super one...I got the thought from a clock...and time, and eternity...kinda some spiritual battles going on in my head...but I just can't get the words right...

2006-10-27 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah, that sucks. I hate when you have an idea, but it doesnt work cuz of word choice and all that.

2006-10-27 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Yeah...it's really annoying...I want to get it done by this coming wednsday, cuz that is the next meeting for the "creative Writing Society" at school...I swear...That club rocks my socks!!!

2006-10-27 [Silent_Chaos]: lol, shweet. Yeah, I finally wrote a poem... its pretty good. lol

2006-10-30 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: that's good...did you put up here...

2006-10-30 [Silent_Chaos]: Not yet... soon tho ^_^

2006-11-01 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: sweetness ^_^ what is it called...to watch for it...or is it already up there and I missed it?

2006-11-01 [Silent_Chaos]: I just put two new ones up. Called, A New Life and I Think of You.

2006-11-01 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Sweet...I'll check them out...

2006-11-01 [Silent_Chaos]: ok!!! ^-^ Theyre not the greatest... but oh well.

2006-11-01 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Wow...really good...VERY good...and I totally can connect with the words...you have no idea how many times I feel someof those, even in one day

2006-11-01 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah... I know. "I Think of You" took like 8 minutes and I was so emotional that day. Cuz guys are losers, lol One in particular. LMAO

2006-11-01 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: HaHa....LMAO...I TOTALLY agree...ugh...I wish guys could grow up and be more mature just as fast as we do...HaHa....some guys never do grow up though...Whats worse is lying hypocritical guys...

2006-11-01 [Silent_Chaos]: Hell yeah. I dunno. Guys are gay and they should die. Well, most, not all. lol

2006-11-01 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Yeah...you could not even imagine what happened today, with this stupid ex-boyfrind of mine that I love too much...but my best friend held me through it all, and he is a guy

2006-11-01 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Sad thing is...He does it cuz He "likes" me and I just keep ignoring that fact cuz I still like stupid head...

2006-11-01 [Silent_Chaos]: Yeah... stupid gayness

2006-11-01 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Jeepers...If the majority of guys just fell off the face of the earth, I prolly would not give a rip...

2006-11-01 [Silent_Chaos]: I agree. TOTALLY! LMAO But yeah... but not all. Cuz there are very few who arent all that bad. In my opinion that is.

2006-11-02 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Yeah...I agree...but you have to be REALLY careful, cuz even some of those "nice" guys end up being real jerks....Like dating your ex-best-friend...HAHa....stupid...

2006-11-02 [Silent_Chaos]: Oh um... yeah... hehe... been there. It is stupid. But yeah, thats kinda why I want to stay single... Im afraid of getting hurt.

2006-11-08 [live fast die young]: nice poems... :)

2006-11-08 [Silent_Chaos]: THANKS!!! ^_^

2006-11-16 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: SINGLE IS AWSOME

2006-11-16 [Silent_Chaos]: I know. lol Thats why I want to stay single... cuz its awesome, HAHA

2006-11-22 [I Think I'm In Love with Edward Elric]: Yeah...<img:img/mood/44166_1164145160.gif>...I am actually half-way glad that I am single now...mmm...been keeping up with the poems?

2006-11-22 [Silent_Chaos]: Eh... not really. I have a cold and Ive been studying for finals... which ended today! YAY!!!!

2006-11-26 [Smile For Me!]: I'm all in a flutter from reading these works from your mind... just thought I'd let you know how they effected me <img:img/mood/44166_1164145305.gif>

2006-11-26 [Silent_Chaos]: Oh, well, thanks. ^_^

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